My first competative team

[spursdude2]

Salamence @ Choice specs

Modest
4 HP/252 SPA/252 SPE

~ Draco Metor
~ Dragon Pulse
~ Flamethrower
~ Hydro Pump

Empoleon @ Peyeta Berry
252 speed 252 special attack 4 HP
Modest

~Hydro Pump
~Agility
~Ice Beam
~Substitute

Dusknoir @ leftovers
Relaxed
252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

~ Gravity
~ DynamicPunch / Earthquake
~ Will-O-Wisp
~ Pain Split / Shadow Sneak

Metagros @ occa berry
Adament
252 HP / 236 Atk / 12 Def / 8 Spe

~ Stealth Rock
~ Earthquake / Meteor Mash
~ Bullet Punch
~ Explosion

Aerodactyl @ White herb
Jolly Preasure
72 HP / 216 Atk / 80 Def / 4 SpD / 136 Spe

~ Curse
~ Stone Edge / Rock Slide
~ Earthquake
~ Roost / Taunt / Ice Fang

Tyranitar @ Expert Belt / Life Orb
Brave
252 Atk / 232 SpA / 24 Spe

~ Crunch
~ Earthquake / Stone Edge
~ Fire Blast
~ Ice Beam

The metagros is going to be my lead

Is this an ok team or could it be better?

If you have any ideas on how to improve it please tell me but don't say anything like "Oh you noob that team is rubbish" because this is my first team.

[S Tailor]

Metagross @ occa berry
Adament
252 HP / 252 attack

~ Stealth Rock
~ Earthquake / Meteor Mash
~ Bullet Punch
~ Explosion

OK, should do you fine. You have just copied smogon with the EVs though, don't worry about the defense and speed EVs.

Salamence @ Choice specs
Modest
4 HP/252 SPA/252 SPE

~ Draco Metor
~ Dragon Pulse
~ Flamethrower
~ Hydro Pump

It should do its job, but MixMence is better for the job:


Mence @ LO
Mild
252 speed 108 attack 144 special attack
Outrage
Draco Meteor
Fire Blast
EQ



Empoleon @ Peyeta Berry
252 speed 252 special attack 4 HP
Modest

~Hydro Pump
~Agility
~Ice Beam
~Substitute

Good, if you get this set up, its game over for the opposition.

Dusknoir @ leftovers
impish
252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

~ Pain split
~ Earthquake
~ Will-O-Wisp
~ Shadow Sneak

OK, but gravity is a useless move. Relaxed also isn't the nature of choice, its impish imo

Aerodactyl @ White herb
Jolly Preasure
72 HP / 216 Atk / 80 Def / 4 SpD / 136 Spe

~ Curse
~ Stone Edge / Rock Slide
~ Earthquake
~ Roost / Taunt / Ice Fang

While the idea of having a Aerodactyl is great, keeping it on the same team as a TTar isn't going to give good type coverage. It makes you extremely weak to Bullet punch and scizor in general, and he's the most used poke in OU.

Replace with:

Gyra @ Lefties
Adamant
252 speed 252 attack
DD
EQ
Stone Edge
Waterfall

Set up, and sweep. Simple.

Tyranitar @ Expert Belt / Life Orb
Brave
252 Atk / 232 SpA / 24 Spe

~ Crunch
~ Earthquake / Stone Edge
~ Fire Blast
~ Ice Beam

IMO, having TTar is going to cause problems for the rest of your team. It starts a sandstorm, and not many of your pokes resist it. I'd ditch it in favour of Ape

Ape @ LO
252 speed 252 attack
Naive
CC
U Turn
Stone Edge
Overheat


The metagros is going to be my lead

Is this an ok team or could it be better?

If you have any ideas on how to improve it please tell me but don't say anything like "Oh you noob that team is rubbish" because this is my first team.





I've reordered everything as it should be. Changes in Bold

Isee you just getting rid of Dusknoir here... just make it all out offensive...

[spursdude2]

Ok thank you very much for your advise! I'm going to say that i'll take the new ideas into consideration so know one knows my full team, just somethings about it!