Attack System

[HMTKSteve]

The Attack system now tracks attacks better.

Be warned the new Bash rule is in effect, check the Help tutorial on the site for more information.

100 Crystal bounty for someone who can rewrite what I wrote in a more legible and readable fashion.

[Kay]

I just sent you an edited version of the whole Help Tutorial. A lot of stuff was still left from whatever game this was before you turned it into TRG, and there were many spelling and grammatical errors. I corrected that stuff, and put it in order of the links in the dropdown menus we have. I changed the wording around of a few things in a way I felt was easier to understand.

Mostly I just edited mistakes though. (Except I left some prepositions at the end of sentences... No one cares about that sort of thing, right?)

I think someone else might be able to write bits of it more coherently than I did, but I think my version would be a good placeholder until someone does that - at least it refers to the right game :lol:

[pikaluva13]

I just sent you an edited version of the whole Help Tutorial. A lot of stuff was still left from whatever game this was before you turned it into TRG, and there were many spelling and grammatical errors. I corrected that stuff, and put it in order of the links in the dropdown menus we have. I changed the wording around of a few things in a way I felt was easier to understand.

Mostly I just edited mistakes though. (Except I left some prepositions at the end of sentences... No one cares about that sort of thing, right?)

I think someone else might be able to write bits of it more coherently than I did, but I think my version would be a good placeholder until someone does that - at least it refers to the right game :lol:
i plan on messing with it in the morning just to let you know ^u^

[joinred1127]

NEASWAP Kara, NEASWAP! >:U

[Kay]

But then the sentences would have been really awkward and hard to understand! :( I neaswap in "formal" writing but I felt like this could be a little more informal, ya know?

Adam, do you want my "proofread" version to mess with so the spelling and grammar is already done for you?

[joinred1127]

The awkward sentences are awkward. :3 I guess it's okay that you left them informal. I'll forgive you.

Lol, now neaswap is a verb. xD

[pikaluva13]

please Kay...you know how much i go crazy over bad grammar :lol:

[Trombones13]

(Sorry that this is continuing to go off-topic, but what in the world is NEASWAP? I tried Googling it and this thread showed up. xD)

*goes to re-read rules*

EDIT: Never mind; I see joinred explained it on Adam's profile. :razz:

[pikaluva13]

I edited it slightly, capitalized all "pokemon" "pokeballs" and found some *difficult spelling errors and some grammar errors...

http://textbin.com/7268e

[joinred1127]

Did you make sure no sentences were ended with prepositions? Also, how is it that Kara and I knew what NEASWAP is, but not the two seniors?

[pikaluva13]

Did you make sure no sentences were ended with prepositions? Also, how is it that Kara and I knew what NEASWAP is, but not the two seniors?
TBH i never noticed anything with prepositions...but then again...i didn't know about NEASWAP, so why would I? :lol: Also, I don't really like english...i just like proper grammar...But no, i don't really see any prepositions at the end...but i wouldn't notice them either...

[HMTKSteve]

Did you edit the source code? i.e. HTML?

[pikaluva13]

Did you edit the source code? i.e. HTML?
If you are asking if i made it into HTML...no, since i don't know how to do that...

[HMTKSteve]

When on the page just view the source.

[pikaluva13]

*just figured it out* now what am i doing with it? :lol: *got confused* I don't believe I've done anything to it...

[HMTKSteve]

You leave the base HTML in place and make edits to the text within the HTML tags.

[pikaluva13]

You leave the base HTML in place and make edits to the text within the HTML tags.
so you want me to edit the actual Team Rocket Tutorial thingy so it's correct then send the HTML? *thinks is figuring out what you are saying* :lol:

[HMTKSteve]

Yes, that makes it easier for me.

[pikaluva13]

Yes, that makes it easier for me.
*is being very intimidated by the blob of HTML :lol: *is getting through it very slowly* lol

[Kay]

I finished, and I did a lot more than Adam did unless he's saying he did that to my copy. Emailed.

[pikaluva13]

I finished, and I did a lot more than Adam did unless he's saying he did that to my copy. Emailed.
there goes 4 hours of my life i'll never get back...:lol:

[Kay]

Sorry, mate... Took me 20 minutes. Guess it helps to know a bit about the code you're editing. :sad:

[Kay]

Sorry for the double post but I noticed a couple typos that I corrected in my written version but missed on the coded version. There are quite a few so I'm going to send a new file.