need help with making my teem better

[Zuld]

my teem is
togekiss - metagross - swampert - electivire - charizard - scizor
air slash meteor mash muddywater thunderpuch flamethrower night slash
aura sphere zen headbutt eathquake ice puch dragon claw double hit
shadow ball hammer arm ice beam cross chop fly iron head
water pulse magnet rise protect earthquake dig x-scissor

[Xr.]

Reformatted:

togekiss metagross swampert electivire charizard scizor
air slash meteor mash muddywater thunderpuch flamethrower night slash
aura sphere zen headbutt eathquake ice puch dragon claw double hit
shadow ball hammer arm ice beam cross chop fly iron head
water pulse magnet rise protect earthquake dig
From what I see, you don't have real resistance against water, nor do you have much offense (but I could be wrong, I don't know all attacks and didn't take the time to check them all)

[Zuld]

what would you sugest i do to improve i was thinking about taking out scizor and putting in garchomp

[dan the man]

what is your togekiss' ability?

[Zuld]

it has serene grace

[Babael]

Well, you have a bunch of sweepers on you team, even Swampert has taken on a sweeping role. I think you should raise a more defensive Swamper to absorb blows that would other wise crush the more fragile sweepers on your team. Since Swampert has good HP and ok defensive stats, I'd do with another wall/tank all together. In general, teams need defenses otherwise you'll suffer a lot of unnecessary losses of your sweepers. Also you have a major weakness to Aerodactly going on there.

[Zuld]

ok i will try to breed another one thanks for the help

what would be another good tank to use

[belnumcree]

Your Togekiss has good Sp Def

[dan the man]

i once saw an amazing strategy with a serene grace togekiss where they used air slash to keep my pokemon flinching until i lost
the kid only had to use 1 pokemon, he was so sure of it that he came into battle with it only and beat me

[Zuld]

i use that ablity alotas well

[Babael]

If are you breeding another Swampert, are you going to breed it into a physical wall? You'll probably want a Relaxed nature for him/her. As for a special wall, Blissey, Dusknior, Umbreon, Milotic, Tentacruel, Claydol, and Snolax are good ones. There are more but those are off the top of my head. Your Togekiss also has good special def.

[Zuld]

but who should i remove from my party to put one others in

would a shuckel be good to replace scizor

[juaco]

trust me i try with shuckle and is so annoying that eventually you are going to get tired of using it.

and sometimes shuckle strategy( depending of the use) cant work out. but somtimes it work really good:)

[Zuld]

i think i will go with snorlax

[Fautor Animus]

I would say stick to one kind of attack, not Physcial and Special attacks for the same pokemon.

[Master]

For togei give it T-wave,that way you can paralyze them so they are slower than keep air slashing away.

[Zuld]

i'm working on a new teem
charizard metagross togekiss electivire kingdra
flamethrower zen haedbutt air slash thunder punch water pulse
toxic meteor mash aura sphere ice punch signal beam
roar stealth rock magical leaf cross chop ice beam
??? magnet rase thunder wave earth quake dragon pulse
or hammer arm

snorlax
rest
sleep talk
body slam
crunch

[Death By Bronzong]

OK, lemme see here.

For Charizard, I'd go physical:
-Flare Blitz
-Earthquake
-Dragon Claw
-Dragon Dance

Many more options there with a lot more power. Charizard doesn't have the staying power to use a toxic/roar combo.

Metagross also physical, but there's a better strategy here:
-Meteor Mash
-Earthquake
-Explosion/Zen Headbutt (If you still want it)
-Agility (One will make you faster than everything)/Bullet Punch (STABed priority attack)/Thunderpunch (Type coverage)

Togekiss (Mostly good):
-Air Slash
-Aura Sphere
-Thunder Wave
-Wish/Roost/Nasty Plot (All more useful than magical leaf)

Electivire is fine as is.

Kingdra:
-Ice Beam
-Dragon Pulse
-Signal Beam
-Surf/Hydro Pump (both way stronger than water pulse)

Snorlax is fine as is.

Now put on items and you'll have a good team. Hope this helps and good luck!

[Zuld]

thank you for the help I'm will need to do a lot more breeding and i haven't mastered it but i will work on it and the reason for magic leaf is ground/water types but i see your point