tonato
03-21-2008, 10:16 PM
ok,time 4 the next chap!
as blake,i,and croagunk walked down kantono town,i noticed a gym poster 4 the next city,it had a picture of him and a scyther "coooolll," a amazed michael said "next city is a couple miles away," blake said yawning since it was morn "well,we better train,i don't want to die because of your "dramatic efect",i said loudly,"don't take it that seriously!" blake yelled "i will!" i yelled back,"ok then seems like u need a little time to chill," he said,"ok,i'll train elsewhere." alright,
as croagunk and I walk Route 301, we saw a trainer with a Pikachu on his shoulder,"hey!whats up!" he yelled to me "you look mad," he said.as he came closer,you could see his two friends,one was a girl with blue hair,the other was tan."so what are you doin here by yourself said the one with a pikachu,"i have a travel partner but we're training seperately," i said "well i'll battle you!" he said,"alright," i challenged "pikachu! i choose you!"he summoned pikachu "pika," it yelled,"go cyndaquil!"i called,
"hm?" i said,"what happened to my cyndaquil?" i asked,she was longer and had opened eyes,"quilava!" she yelled while looking at me,"looks like it evolved!" said the trainer, "by the way,my name is satoshi,"he yelled "i'm hikari," said the girl "takeshi," he said.my name is michael,i said "o.k.,michael,lets go!pikachu,thunderbolt!" "quilava, dodge and use ember!"she dodged halfway and got hit on the back."can you still go?" i asked,with a nod and a "quil,"she got up and did what i comanded earlier and used
ember,pikachu was gone by then,it then was behind quilava,"smokescreen,then quick attack!" i said,she let a smog out of her mouth and tackled into pikachu with blinding speed."pikachu,return! he said now,aipom,focus punch!" he exclamed as he threw a pokeball "ai!"it said,as its' third fist started to glow "so thats' what croagunk did...." i whispered.i noticed quilava did'nt wait for my comand as she dug a hole."aipom,go in the hole!"he exclaimed "now!"a white light came out of the hole as quilava came out
with a fainted aipom she then herself collapsed and we both returned our pokemon."staravia,go" he called ":(:(:(:(!" i yelled as i summoned croagunk "you're not good against flying types," i said "arial ace!" he yelled "use poison jab!" i yelled he jumped on staravia and poisoned its wing,as it crashed because of the weight it was carrying.croagunk jumped off of it as satoshi returned it,"now!turtwig! use razor leaf!" he said while a turtle came out swinging leaves at croagunk. "now use tackle!" he yelled
as turtwig tackled croagunk,he used poison sting on turtwigs' back making it stop in its tracks "synthesis!"he yelled,turtwig started to glow but....it stoped.croagunk had a purple fist on the bottom of turtwigs' shell."you did your best,"he said as a red beam enveloped it."pikachu, come ou-" "i quit," i said "why?" he asked "you're gonna win,i know that!" i said "well,since it was a good battle,here have this"he said as he got a egg with a pokeball and handed it to me."thanks,you helped my croagunk alot"
"well see ya later!" he waved,"bye,"i waved back,as i steped back into kantono town."heyy!mike!how'd you do!?"he asked,"i met a great trainer." what's his name?" he asked "satoshi," i said as we walked to the pokemon center while the sun set.
ok,that was way too long. so how'd you like it?
as blake,i,and croagunk walked down kantono town,i noticed a gym poster 4 the next city,it had a picture of him and a scyther "coooolll," a amazed michael said "next city is a couple miles away," blake said yawning since it was morn "well,we better train,i don't want to die because of your "dramatic efect",i said loudly,"don't take it that seriously!" blake yelled "i will!" i yelled back,"ok then seems like u need a little time to chill," he said,"ok,i'll train elsewhere." alright,
as croagunk and I walk Route 301, we saw a trainer with a Pikachu on his shoulder,"hey!whats up!" he yelled to me "you look mad," he said.as he came closer,you could see his two friends,one was a girl with blue hair,the other was tan."so what are you doin here by yourself said the one with a pikachu,"i have a travel partner but we're training seperately," i said "well i'll battle you!" he said,"alright," i challenged "pikachu! i choose you!"he summoned pikachu "pika," it yelled,"go cyndaquil!"i called,
"hm?" i said,"what happened to my cyndaquil?" i asked,she was longer and had opened eyes,"quilava!" she yelled while looking at me,"looks like it evolved!" said the trainer, "by the way,my name is satoshi,"he yelled "i'm hikari," said the girl "takeshi," he said.my name is michael,i said "o.k.,michael,lets go!pikachu,thunderbolt!" "quilava, dodge and use ember!"she dodged halfway and got hit on the back."can you still go?" i asked,with a nod and a "quil,"she got up and did what i comanded earlier and used
ember,pikachu was gone by then,it then was behind quilava,"smokescreen,then quick attack!" i said,she let a smog out of her mouth and tackled into pikachu with blinding speed."pikachu,return! he said now,aipom,focus punch!" he exclamed as he threw a pokeball "ai!"it said,as its' third fist started to glow "so thats' what croagunk did...." i whispered.i noticed quilava did'nt wait for my comand as she dug a hole."aipom,go in the hole!"he exclaimed "now!"a white light came out of the hole as quilava came out
with a fainted aipom she then herself collapsed and we both returned our pokemon."staravia,go" he called ":(:(:(:(!" i yelled as i summoned croagunk "you're not good against flying types," i said "arial ace!" he yelled "use poison jab!" i yelled he jumped on staravia and poisoned its wing,as it crashed because of the weight it was carrying.croagunk jumped off of it as satoshi returned it,"now!turtwig! use razor leaf!" he said while a turtle came out swinging leaves at croagunk. "now use tackle!" he yelled
as turtwig tackled croagunk,he used poison sting on turtwigs' back making it stop in its tracks "synthesis!"he yelled,turtwig started to glow but....it stoped.croagunk had a purple fist on the bottom of turtwigs' shell."you did your best,"he said as a red beam enveloped it."pikachu, come ou-" "i quit," i said "why?" he asked "you're gonna win,i know that!" i said "well,since it was a good battle,here have this"he said as he got a egg with a pokeball and handed it to me."thanks,you helped my croagunk alot"
"well see ya later!" he waved,"bye,"i waved back,as i steped back into kantono town."heyy!mike!how'd you do!?"he asked,"i met a great trainer." what's his name?" he asked "satoshi," i said as we walked to the pokemon center while the sun set.
ok,that was way too long. so how'd you like it?