Tales of Turnback Cave. Chap. 1

[Giratina master]

Hi! I decided to write a story of a young Giratina and how he realizes that the world around him is changing...

Tell me what you think via PM, post or rep points! Thanks for reading!:D

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Chapter 1: pilot

Year:1811

"....."

"............ Wha..What's going on? Bronzong, what is happening?...Bronzong?"

I look around and find no trace of my longtime friend and companion. I thought he was playing a trick when I realize that it's dusk. The time of night when all ghosts, me included, are active. The time of day when the pokemon of life cannot stop our haunting, when my nemisis Shaymin can't stop me from fufilling my duties as the embodiement of death.

I stretch my inky, eerie wings and roar in awakining. Bronzong is nowhere. The cave is now a ruin, a relic of past years of imprisonment. I have been asleep for centuries due to my father Arceus confining me here. I wait.

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197 years later

A "trainer" of my kind, "Pokemon" as you call them, discovers my cave.

He is to go by the name William by my understanding. He has a team of water "pokemon" with him. A blastoise, a swampert, a surskit, a walrein, a wailmer and a fellow "pokemon" of godly proportions, Kyogre.

I know I'll be found. Just how and when are my interest...
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"I know you're here boy, I've known for awhlie. You didn't think that you could hide from me, a god?"

"Yes.. I did, actually. I knew you'd notice, so I came prepared to capture you."

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[Giratina master]

Sorry for the Double post... Will someone please give me some feedback so I know to continue or not?....:sad::confused:

[Magma Krystal]

Hmmm...I would add a few more details per post, to keep people reading, and maybe change the format. But, as for the story so far, I liked it, and do want to know what happens next. Keep writing, and you'll get better and better, whether you reconize it or not. Good luck, and I'll be waiting for the next part!

[Giratina master]

Yay! My 1st fan! I promise to update the story soon!

[Cleon]

yeah i like how you've set up giratina.......there are alot of bronzongs in dat cave of his lol

[Giratina master]

Well, I wanted the story to have a feel of sadness and wanted to portray Giratina to seem bitter but still feel as though he really a good guy.

[Giratina master]

"So you came to capture me? How?"

"There are devices in this world that will assist in your capture, you old fool. So you claim to be a god? Let's see how godly you are after an ice beam or two."

The trainer had crossed the line; he had damaged my pride. I attacked with a full-frontal assault of Shadow Force. Although it is against the Ancient Laws for a being of my proportion to attack humans, I broke the Laws. I figured I might get away with it, seeing as I wrote nearly a third of those old "boundary lines".

I soon made contact with a hard shell, gleaming with a brilliant sheen. I had encountered a good-for-nothing blastoise, ready to hand my hindquarters to me on a platter.

"That was a dirty trick you pulled there, Giratina."

"You dare say my name you worthless, fleshy bag of gradually and eventually dying scum?!?"

"Sticks and stones, y'old geezer"

He was parring my words, trying (but not succeeding) to distract me as blastoise prepared to make a hit with a Skull Bash. I noticed and flipped the over-grown turtle on his back with a taste of Earth Power, aggrivating William. Blastoise now knocked cold, the belligerent trainer sent out a rather tough-looking surskit, scaring me. Us ghosts don't fare well with insects; they can track our every move with their CompoundEyes ability, slow us, imprison us, and are just plain creepy. To tell you a secret: I'm a bug-a-phobe. I hate the things!

The surskit started with a Sweet Scent, followed quickly by a Thief. I felt a blindingly terrible pain of darkness hit me. Another thing to know: ghosts hate the pitch black, but also hate the light. We prefer a mix; shadows, shades, and such. As I was wincing the pain away, it occured to me that surskits have a low willpower and endurance, making them weaker physically, even to attacks they have resiliance against. Earth Power easily wiped out the creepy-crawly water-skitter.

"What next?", I lazily yawned.

"Oh, you'll see... Go Walrein!"

[Cleon]

lol bit of humour with the bug type description, nice work cnt wait for the next part :D

[Giratina master]

New Chapter to be posted soon!

[Giratina master]

As I finished beating his last ally, the boy cried. He thought he had a chance against me, honest and true.

I watched him cry and felt some strange connection.... It was as though he reminded me of someone, but who? Bronzong. He was a confident boy, strong and self-concsious too. Just like him.....

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FLASHBACK
Year: 1245

I was still young and had a lot to learn in this world. Bronzor was always by my side, prepared to defend his only friend. He had a loyal, yet lonely nature about him..... He never wanted to play, always mope over the weather or whatever was bugging him.....

I wanted to tell him something, I remember that, but I forget what exactly.....

Ah, maybe it was about when we were being dumb children..... We fought about who would be more powerful and important when we grew up.
He knew about the vortex I was born of and was always trying to conquer his true feelings in battle.

To say the least, he was jealous. Bronzor fought with me when he thought needed and foght against me when he thought he was more important.

I wanted to hate myself for causing these quarrels between us, but I could not change who I was...... I was predestined to be a leader but a companion of humans, to be a god----- of death.....

[tonato]

go on.please O_O

[Shadow]

me thinks that bronzor got reincarnated like in mystery dungeon. will he get captured becuase he feels sorry for william? *sits on a lazy boy sofa with soda and waits for next chapter:wink:*

[belnumcree]

I'm really liking delving into Giratina's past.

[Giratina master]

As you can see, I finish ed the chapter, although it isn't very good.... *groan*

[belnumcree]

As you can see, I finish ed the chapter, although it isn't very good.... *groan*

Why isn't it good? :confused:

Two friends and a friendship broken over something that wasn't in his control.

[Giratina master]

It's not detailed enough... I'm doing this from school.

[tonato]

i can never get away with that at school.:(

[Giratina master]

I'm sneaky sometimes.... *sshhh* I didn't say that....

[mewmewmew]

this story is awesome what do you mean it's no good keep going

[Sorgatani]

It really is not bad. If you find yourself with ideas and no time, jot them down and edit the post later if you feel you need to.

[Giratina master]

"Grrr... Fine. If you want, I will join your little party. Only because I fell sympathetic towards your cause though."

The boy stopped crying.
"W-w-wha? W-what are you-u saying?"

"You heard me, boy. Now get up and we'll depart."

"Really? Just like that?"

"Don't ask stupid questions, child. Now where to?"

"Well...... how about the Battle Area?"

Hm. Already he wanted to show me off in battle. Brat.

"Fine. Onwards to the pokecenter at Battle Area."

[Giratina master]

I'll be posting the next two chapters soon!

[Giratina master]

As we descended to a foresty area, I noticed more humans on the horizon. There was an auspicious-looking volcano on the other side of the island. I saw deserts, mountain ranges, rivers, buildings, and more sights than I could've imagined on such a small mass of land. When we landed, William told me more of this sunny paradise.

"This is the Battle Area. Here you may find more trainers, such as myself, looking to improve their teams' skills. However, I am here for more than just battle. Since am the William Glaspie, rare-hunter extrordinaire, I come here in search of the volcano-creator Heatran!"

Heatran?, I thought. Well William must have a death wish if he wants to go up against that old maid...

What I said, though, went more like this:

"W-w-what?! Heatran?! Are you out of god-forsaken mind? Who put this thought in your head, Ash Ketchum of Pallet Town?!"

"...yes...", he said with an ashamed look on his face.

"You young, arrogant fool! Heatran'll kill me if she saw me again! Especially after the Legend Wars!"

"Huh? The who-what-now?"

"Never mind... heed my word, though: Heatran's 'bad news', so don't go near her unless you want magma as blood and rocks as brains!"

"Okay.", he said nonchalantly, as he strolled toward the volcano ahead...

[Magma Krystal]

[quote=Giratina master;92428]
What I said, though, went more like this:

Who put this thought in your head, Ash Ketchum of Pallet Town?!"

"...yes...", he said with an ashamed look on his face.

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Poor Ash, so stupid.:lol:

[belnumcree]

Hilarious. I really can't wait till you delve more into these histories. :D

[Giratina master]

Flashback, Date: ???; The Age of War

Fire rained from the heavens, floods of earth and water covered the planet, and beings of gargantuan power clashed in battle to claim territory in what was believed as free domain. Some of these beings died in war and were lost forever, as they were the last of their kind...

I was one o three powers watching the war from afar, keeping record of the losses. Alongside me were the two sides of the moon, Cresselia and Darkrai. As I, the lord in charge of dimensions, Giratina, watched this monstrous battle unfold, I kept an eye on someone. He was a small one, but had a heart of the purest gold. He fought to keep this land within his grasp. Little did I foresee, he would be the one controlling and dominating this planet within eons of time. He was human, he was man, he was tool-user and fire-maker and fear-dominater. He was a god on earth. He would win above all.

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Does Giratina really despise humans?
You'll see as time comes...

[Trombones13]

Very nice! I, too, am really enjoying how detailed you're getting with Giratina's past. It picks at the mind... :)

[Giratina master]

Coolio! Thx for the compliment, Kurt! :D

[Trombones13]

Coolio! Thx for the compliment, Kurt! :D
Anytime; just be sure to write some more! :D I should go do the same. *scurries off to write*