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mewmaster
03-31-2008, 05:56 PM
this is my fanfic
Chapter 1
As the sun rose light came into my cave. Living as a lonely mew I have to stay in hiding. I have to
stay inside this cold cave for my own safety. I only have to stay here because of those horrible
people in team rocket. They took my d.n.a and made a clone of me. To make things worse they
revealed I exist to the world. Now I am a pokemon wanted all over the world.

I hear a loud smash that comes from the entrance. A wild salamence has wondered into my cave.
Salamence if I remember is a dragon type pokemon who should be weak against ice. That means I
should use a blizzard to freeze him into a block of ice. As i concentrate cold wind blows around and
pieces of ice form in my cave. When i open my eyes i see salamence. Yes! he has become a solid
block of ice.As i close my eyes again a bolt of white light comes from me and hits salamence in his
block of ice. I have hit him with teleport and now he is starting to fade away to wherever i teleported to.

Then i hear another loud crash but this time it isn't a pokemon. Rocks have been damaged
from my blizzard attack and the entrance is completely covered with rocks. I'm worried now
because if i dont move them i won't be able to see well. As i close my eyes to charge up a
psychic i hear a loud smash and everything goes black.

Trombones13
04-01-2008, 03:48 PM
Very nice, vowl! I'm glad you decided to write a fan-fic. One thing though, make sure that you separate your sentences a little bit so it's not just one huge block of text. Nice job; I'll be looking forward to Chapter 2! :D

mewmaster
04-01-2008, 03:56 PM
well its already written i have just not posted it
I have now posted it

PokemonLover
04-01-2008, 04:20 PM
Very nice work there!

mewmaster
04-01-2008, 04:34 PM
Thank you its got a big storyline thats going to happen well i have posted the 2nd chapter. The third one i hope to finish for tomorrow

PokemonLover
04-03-2008, 08:03 PM
Post more!

mewmaster
04-04-2008, 05:01 PM
im posting them as new threads just look
otherwise the first post becomes too crowded