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Breeder Joe
05-07-2008, 08:43 PM
The beginning of a long journey

Zane led his hands across his poke balls, making sure he had every one of them. “Let’s see, Chaos, Sparky, Neo, Pluffle, Fluff, and…where’s Miss Snow?” He felt around the empty latch on his belt, where his prized pokemon was suppose to be. “Ugh, she should be right here!” He sorted through his backpack, his room, his house, yet no poke ball to be found. He looked out in his back yard, and spotted her special pink ball on his patio table. “Finally! How could she of been out here?” He glanced at his watch, a usual habit of his, and almost jumped out of shock. “Two o’ clock! I’ll be late!” He ran over to the gate that led his back yard to his front yard, and didn’t even take the time to open it. He jumped over it, using his arm as leverage when he crossed over. He practically flew! He lifted his bike up mid-run and jumped on. “I’ll be late if I don’t go top speed!” He reached down where his feet were pedaling like crazy and flipped a switch like mechanism. He gained speed faster than usual, but with the sacrifice of sharp turning abilities.

He pasted up a large line of people with signs saying “Win it for us Zane!”, “Go Zane Go!”, and an assortment of other encouraging signs. Zane was going to the Hearthome Pokemon Finals, one of the biggest Pokemon events in Sinnoh. He had already made it to the top four contestants of the tournament. The prize of this contest was very overwhelming, a ticket to Kanto. Kanto had recently shut off it’s ports to only a select few, because of the commotion with Team Rocket and all.

He past the marshy lands of Pastoria city and maneuvered around in a wild frenzy. As he looked around, and felt the win in his short, black hair, he drifted off into a little daydream, only half paying attention to the road ahead.

Zane was born and raised in Pastoria city. His Dad left when Zane was a child, not for personal issues, but his dad had a dream to find a special Pokemon. A Pokemon he would tell no one about until he found it. Zane’s dad was an expert Pokemon trainer, and had a unique ability. Zane’s dad, and his ancestors, could establish a spiritual bond and talk to Pokemon. The stronger the bond, the more numerous the abilities. If the bond was maxed to where the trainer and the Pokemon depended their lives on each other, than the trainer could talk to the Pokemon, feel their pain and joy, read their minds, and many other things. Zane hasn’t just yet discovered this talent, but he will some day.

Before Zane could realize what had just happened, he was in the air and then down into the slushy mud. He sat up, shook his head, and looked around to find out what had happen. He saw his bike trashed next to a rock. He had hit it while he wasn’t paying attention. He got up and wiped his clothes off, a bit dirty. He took off his backpack and pulled out a clean shirt. Within five minutes he was all clean and running for his life. He had to be at Hearthome city’s Megadome by 3:30 P.M. “Oh how I wish Ace wasn’t in the daycare and here…” Ace, was of course, his Swellow. And without Ace, he would have to Bike, run, or walk to everywhere he went. “Oh, I’m going to be late!”

Breeder Joe
05-07-2008, 08:47 PM
Hey guys! Feel free to post comments, suggestions, art, etc! I'll be making more don't worry, but it could take a day or two for each part of the story. I'll work my hardest!

Breeder Joe
05-07-2008, 11:21 PM
As he was running, he pasted up a shady looking character picking on a new trainer. “I’ll just be taking that!” the green haired male said as he snatched away the poke ball from the small 10-year old. “No! That’s my only Pokemon! Give it back!” Zane looked at his watch and then the kid. Then he looked ahead to the road leading to Hearthome city. He grabbed one of his poke balls and approached the bully. “Give it back to him!” Zane yelled.

“And what are you going to do about it.”

“How about I battle you for it. If I win, you give the poke ball to the kid, if I lose, you can have it.”

“Hahahaha! Fine, your on! Zubat, go!” Zane smirked and almost burst out laughing. A Zubat? This was going to take less than a few minutes. Holding his laughter, he managed to get a “Sparky, stand!” out. He threw his poke ball up and it landed the ground with a beep. A red light shot out and formed a rugged-looking Raichu who had a serious look on it’s face. The Zubat and the mean green haired man looked terrified. “Z-Z-Zubat…tackle! Now!” The Zubat looked confused. Like it was really going to charge at a Raichu that ferocious. “Zubat! I said tackle!” The Zubat at no choice but to obey. It rammed toward the calm but terrifying Raichu. “Sparky, dodge and use thunderbolt.” Raichu used a simple slide and charged a thunderbolt in its hands. The Zubat turned around only to find a zap of crackling electricity in its face. The Zubat shrieked in pain and slammed into the ground. The bully looked in horror as he withdrew his Pokemon. “You think I’ll give up this Pokemon that easily? Think again!” The green-haired man sprinted away. The small boy had been standing away from the fight for the time-being, but now he started to cry. “Don’t cry, I’ll get back your Pokemon.” He looked at Raichu, who seemed to read his mind perfectly. “You know what to do, right?”

“Rai! Raichu!”

“Then go, that jerk is gaining ground.” And with that, an electric veil surrounded Raichu’s body, like a coat of armor, and Raichu sprung forward, like a strike of lightning. Within seconds, Raichu had traveled a meter or two in front of the bandit. And with a swift curve to the side, had made it so that Raichu now faced the bandit with a 5 foot difference between them. The Raichu grinned, and, while still having the veil of electricity around it, jammed its body into the thief. The thief did a flip in the air, and landed on the ground with a loud smacking noise, leaving him gasping for air. The Raichu picked up poke ball in its mouth and carried back to Zane. “Thank you Sparky, that will be all for now.” Zane sucked Raichu back into his ball and handed the child’s poke ball back to him. “I believe this belongs to you.”

“Oh thank you so much mister! I really like my Pokemon, and I don’t know what to do without it.”

“Well, you’re certainly welcome. Train with your Pokemon, and you two will be very good team one day.” He glanced at his watch and was pleased, it was only 3:10, and he only had about five minutes from Hearthome. “Looks like I’ll make it anyway!” With his final good byes to the boy, he ran off, glancing at his watch paranormally.
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I actually got that out in what, 3 hours? Hmmm, I see the views going up, but no posts yet? Well, hopefully that will change soon.

nana nettie
05-08-2008, 12:02 AM
Nice story Breeder Joe :) I don't like to play critic, I only read and let you know if I like it ;) I like it, and I'm looking forward to the next part :)

soccergurl22
05-08-2008, 04:29 PM
Great Story! Can't wait for more! =D

belnumcree
05-08-2008, 04:50 PM
Great story so far. :-D

Trombones13
05-09-2008, 07:07 PM
I'm liking this story; nice idea. I'll be looking forward to more! :-D

Breeder Joe
05-10-2008, 11:19 AM
Only a few minutes after defeating the Pokemon thief, Zane arrived at Hearthome city. It was as lovely, and busy, as it was the few days ago that he came to compete in Hearthome’s Pokemon Festival Tournament. Now he was determined to win the finals, and the prized ticket to Kanto. He wanted to stop and look at all the tall building, the fabulous shops and restaurants, and the other glamorous things Hearthome held, but he had no time. He had to be at the Megadome’s registration desk in ten minutes or he was disqualified.

He jogged around town until he found “Destiny Drive”, the road that led to the Megadome. He started to smile and get all excited, but then took a few deep breaths, and calmed down. “This is no time to get jittery,” He mumbled to himself. Zane looked at all the people on Destiny Drive, they were all gathering at the Megadome. They were all going to watch Zane and four other superb trainers battle it out.

Zane made it through the sea of people and asked the receptionist where he should go. “Oh, you’re Zane aren’t you? The last four contestants should go down the hall to my left, take a right, and enter the third door you see. Oh and, good luck Zane, I’ll be cheering for you!” Zane smiled a bowed, a common courtesy, then he followed the directions the receptionist had given him. He ended up in a room with three other people. One guy looked at him and said, “They paired me up with a kid!?” The man had spiky, black hair and a scar going down his left cheek. He was very muscular and wore a orange tank top with blue jeans. “What do you mean “kid”? I’ll show you!” A Pokemon battle judge came in and blew a whistle. “Keep it down in here, Zane and Riko will be fighting next. The winner will be battling Xero.”

“What do you mean by that?” Zane asked. “They’ve already fought?” He looked over to the contestant who was sorting through his bag. He was leaving! Zane looked at his watch, it was 3:45. “Darn! I must have been distracted in Hearthome for too long! At least I didn’t miss my match.”

“Well, it’s starting right now. Zane, just step into this elevator, and Riko, you step into this one.” He pointed at two different elevators that were on opposite sides of the room. Zane walked into his, but Riko was talking to the battle judge. Zane watched the conversation until the elevator doors closed. In a few second, he was elevated onto a dazzling stage with thousands of people cheering and yelling. On the other side was Riko, smirking at Zane. Then the battle judge was elevated onto the stage. “Ok, some rules. Three Pokemon each. First one to run out of Pokemon loses.” And with the wave of a flag, the match had started!

“Alakazam, fight!“ Riko said as he opened the poke ball. An Alakazam appeared on the stage, ready as ever. “An Alakazam? This should be interesting. Chaos, stand!" Zane threw a poke ball to the ground and a red light flashed forward. The light swirled and shaped into a Houndoom! “Now the fight begins! Chaos, flamethrower!” The Houndoom gathered fire into its mouth and then released it. The flames went straight toward Alakazam. “Alakazam, Light screen,” Riko demanded. The Alakazam crossed its two spoons together and formed a barrier. The flames bounced off and shot in all different directions. “Now Chaos, iron tail!” Houndoom’s tail turned a shiny gray. Houndoom charged forward with great speed and slammed his tail into Alakazam’s head. Alakazam didn’t even get time to react. It fell to its knees and clutched its head. “Get up Alakazam!” Alakazam did as Riko demanded, but it was off balance. “Good job Chaos, now dark pulse!” Houndoom channeled dark energy into a violet beam with dark ovals swirling in it. The beam hit Alakazam directly in the head, again. Alakazam swirled around and fell to ground like it did before. “Get up and use psybeam!” Alakazam was completely knocked out. The battle judge waved a red flag to Alakazam. “Alakazam is fainted!” Riko withdrew Alakazam and put the poke ball in his pocket. “Lets see you take on my next Pokemon!”

“Bring it on, I’m just getting started!”
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