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revelp8
06-29-2008, 08:11 PM
My first fan fiction story. happy readings!

This is the story about a young man named James. He’s an experienced pokemon trainer, having already beaten the 8 gym leaders in Sinnoh, and is on his way to challenge the elite four and ultimately challenge Cynthia, the champion of the Sinnoh region. However, having just turned 21 this past week, he spent his whole week celebrating with his team of six. His trusty starter Empoleon, whom he nicknamed Emperor, along with his Luxray, Roserade, Garchomp, Glaceon, and Floatzel were there to join in he festivities. They were lounging around Lake Valor eating a feast of berries and the day was a good one, all sun and no clouds to be seen in the sky. Figuring they had rested enough for the day, he called all of his pokemon back into their pokeballs and started to head north towards Veilstone city. He knew that the route had plenty of trainers to battle against; having battled them beforehand he began to wonder if they have been training their pokemon to a higher level.

Having no such luck finding any trainers while walking all day he grumbled,
“Dang, no trainers to battle and I have to camp out tonight, oh well, floatzel, come on out and help me set up.”
He released Floatzel, strong and fast as ever, she quickly helped him set up camp and a tent. Once inside the tent, he releases Roserade and Luxray as well, simply because they were light sleepers, alert while sleeping in case anything were to happen.

In a distance not too far away from the young trainer, there lurked a behemoth of a pokemon, stuck in a cave behind an eerie lake that no one knows about. Massive it was, one of the strongest pokemon of all in Sinnoh, and there it began to plot. It was at this time it hatched a plan to escape that cursed cave and let loose a rampage that Sinnoh will never forget.

pokefreak101
06-29-2008, 09:39 PM
I love your story. Keep typing those words.

pikaluva13
06-30-2008, 12:14 PM
I love your story. Keep typing those words.
but then it'd get boring, reading the same exact words, over and over and over and over and over and over...yeah. Nice fan-fic, hope to see more soon!:cool:

pokefreak101
06-30-2008, 08:14 PM
I meant typing different words on different parts.

revelp8
07-11-2008, 07:54 PM
the second part continues with this!

While James and his pokemon were sleeping, nocturnal pokemon such as Stunky and Mismagius were waking up and started to scrounge around, looking for food, however. They knew something about tonight was strange, something did not just feel right. There was a strange mist that lurked around, and the nocturnal pokemon started to get real anxious. Then all too suddenly, a very loud roar erupted into the night! The pokemon all fled, leaving James with just his sleeping pokemon, however. They all awoke too, frightened by that horrible roar that rumbled even the ground. They all lept outside of the tent, just to realize they were surrounded! A whole group of haunters, golbats and bronzongs had encircled them, had them outnumbered. James didn’t know what was going on, but he had to do something to get his pokemon out of this tricky situation.
He yelled, “WHAT IS GOING ON AROUND HERE!? Why do you have us surrounded like this?"

Then, without any warning, they all attacked at once. Attacks were flying everywhere, but James kept his cool and shouted out attacks for his pokemon
“Floatzel use Crunch on all the Haunter and quick!”
“Luxray use Fire Fang on those 2 Bronzongs on the right side of us!!”
“Roserade, you stay with me and Ill tell you to shoot Extrasensory on all these Golbats!”

Floatzel was very quick with her work. She crunched all the Haunter, making them all faint, although one of them managed to hit Night Shade on her. She shrugged the attack off her, hit that particular Haunter with an Aqua jet Crunch combo. Luxray was having the time of his life, dodging the Bronzongs Psychic attacks and hitting them with Fire Fang. Their defenses though were really tough and seeing this, James shouted, “Floatzel, help out Luxray with Rain Dance! Luxray, once its raining, use THUNDER on them!!”
“Roserade, quick, Extrasensory on the golbat that’s coming our way!”
It was hard, trying to keep up with all the mayhem that was going on. There were Golbats coming in from every direction, having to dodge and duck along with Roserade, while Floatzel was trying to make it rain while Luxray was off fighting the two Bronzongs.

Just then, two Golbats were diving from the air from opposite ends. James was at a loss, he didn’t know what to do at that point.