Shaun's Super Story

[Psychic4Life]

Ok I decided to start writing my own fanfic after reading XD001's fanfic (read it it is awesome) so here I go tell me what you think. By the way Shaun is a Shinx. Quick thing Shaun has a Naive nature when his trainer is trying to hatch a Mild natured Shinx. Anything in parentheses is something I put in, not Shaun.

Shaun's Super Story Part 1:The Pokecup

Yawwwwwnnnnn! I open my eyes on my new life. I think I just came out from this broken oval here. Hey who's that? He's aiming this red thing at me and frowning. Am I ok? Is something wrong? Am I not good enough or something? Why is he telling me to get lost? That's not very nice :mad:! Ok so where do I go now?
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I just woke up from a nap and after delicious red circular thing (apple), I head to find a place for me to call home.
As I search for my new home I discover a Roselia :315: shooting purple pointy things (poison sting in case you don't know) at a tree.
"Hi! What are you doing to that tree?" I curiously ask
"I'm training to win the Pokecup!What's your name?" Roselia replies
"My name is Shaun!!! And what's the Pokecup?" :confused:
"Hi Shaun! I'm Rose (<===== how original)! How do you not know what the Pokecup is?"
"Well I just hatched so I don't know much...."I reluctantly say :rolleyes:
"Ok well the Pokecup is a tournament Garchomp and Electivire run every year. All pokemon test their skills in it to see if they can win and become famous!" Rose says
"When and where is it?" I ask :confused:
"A couple months from now but I want to get a head start on the rest of the pokemon. It's in a far off place called Sunyshore City."
"Ok thanks and good luck Rose!" I say eagerly as I continue walking
"Thanks and you too if you decide to comepte!"
Ohhhhhhhhhh I am and you better watch out Rose. >=]


Reply back and tell me how you like it so far! :)

[Psychic4Life]

If you think I am copying anyone, please tell me so I can change it so I am not, I do not mean to copy anyone. Shaun is currently at level 2. I forgot to mention in my first part that it starts in the patch of grass just north of Sandgem Town, where Dawn teaches you how to catch a pokemon. He is heading in the direction of Jubilife City. Ok here we go.

Shaun's Super Story Part 2:The Green Dome of Doom

Ok so I got to find this Sunyshore City place, wherever that is. Well, let's see what moves I know. Hmmmm that tree will do just fine. Let's try Spark!Shiiii, Shiiiii, Shiiiiiiiiinnnnnnxxxxxx!!!!!!!!(Nothing happens)Nothing :(. Ok, how about roar? Shhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxx !!!!!(nothing happens)Awww, nothing again :(. (After hours of trying attacks, Shaun realizes he only knows tackle)

Ok, so I only know tackle huh. So let's practice! (Shaun perfects his tackle attack and levels up twice)Wow, I'm really getting good at my tackle attack. Ok, now how about I break off that branch holding those tasty
red circles (apples) with my tackle attack! (Shinx succesfully breaks off the branch but doesn't realize a Burmy is sleaping on it)

"Hey!!!I was sleepnig there!!!Why'd you destroy my home?Where am I supposed to live now!!!??? :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:"Burmy says angrily
"Sorry about that, I got hungry and I saw those tasty red things and I wanted one....sorry =["
"I don't care about your sorries I just want to teach you a lesson!!!" Burmy challenged
"Ok you're on!!"
Burmy starts off by putting this green dome around him(protect) and I use tackle, but I can't reach him!!I just bounce off. Ok let's try tackle again!Burmy tried putting that green dome around him again but I was too fast and quickly got him and sent him flying. But he quickly recovered and was back on his feet. I went for another tackle but he sent that dome up again and I bounced off it once more. Ok, I gotta find a way around that dome. this kept happening over and over until I noticed the dome was getting weaker and weaker every time. He's getting tired! This is my chance to beat him! Alright full force tackle attack! He brings up the dome and.....it's gone! I hit him and goes right into a treee! His eyes look like spirals (fainted) so I think he fainted!Wooooohoooooo!!!!*RUMBLE RUMBLE RUMBLE* Oh I forgot how hungry I was!Hehehe :)

Thanks please reply back and tell me how've I done =] :-D
And by the way the reason why Burmy's last protect failed is because he ran out of power points.

[Gouswer]

Lol, he only knows tackle XD

[Golem Crusher]

. Let's try Spark!Shiiii, Shiiiii, Shiiiiiiiiinnnnnnxxxxxx!!!!!!!!(Nothing happens)Nothing :(. Ok, how about roar? Shhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxx !!!!!(nothing happens)Awww, nothing again :(. (After hours of trying attacks, Shaun realizes he only knows tackle)

In the first part, you never told us in any way what the pokemon is. After reading what I quoted, I now know what pokemon the main character is. The names are fine, but tell the species of the main character next time. Other than that, it's a good story!

BTW, it was funny on how he tried spark until he FINALLY realizes he knew tackle.

[Psychic4Life]

I actually did in the first chapter of part one before the story started. It's the second sentence. Thanks for reading (not sarcasticly).

[Psychic4Life]

Hey Gouswer I clicked on you link under your sig and what's EoP?

[Golem Crusher]

Hey Gouswer I clicked on you link under your sig and what's EoP?

It stands for Estate of Panic, and please don't double post. Click on the Edit button on your post to make it easier.

[Psychic4Life]

Ok sorry =[

[Psychic4Life]

Ok guys thanks for the replies. Golem Crusher sorry for the confusion I'll try to make improtant things out in the open instead of being a "by the way...." and thanks for reading them (not sarcasticly). This one takes place in that huge patch of grass by Jubilife. Shaun is now level 7 so he knows leer now. Here we go part 3.

Shaun's Super Story Part 3: Revenge and Friends

Whoooooo that battle was great!I'm really tired! I should take a.....a.....*yaaaaawwwwwnnnnnnn*
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*yaaaawwwwwnnnnn* that was a good nap so let's get going to Sunyshore!! (after a bit of walking) Huh? Is someone following me? I feel like I'm being watched but nobody's behind me. Weeeeiiiiirrrrdddd. Huh! What are those eyes!!!!Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
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"Hey punk wake up!" A voice commands
"Huh?Where am I?What are you? What is this place?"
"That doesn't matter as long as we get revenge! :mad:!!!" The voice shouts
What? Revenge? Ow! Ow! Stop that! Not the face! Ow! I'm getting hit left and right with tackles. I think these are Burmy attacking me. Hey! There's the Burmy I beat yesterday! The little!!!!! Ow!!
"Monti! Fire blast!!!!"
"Sunny! Aerial Ace!!!"
"Saaaallllaaamence!!!!!"
"Leeeeaaaffffeon!!!"
Huh? What's happening? Who are they? Why are the Burmy running away? Ohhh.....too tired......fading......
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"Hey sleepy head.Wake up." A female voice says
"Yeah wake up sleepy." A male voice says
Huh?Ahhh!Humans!!Hide!!!!:eek:
"Awwww it's ok little dude, come on out." the male voice says
"Yeah, it's ok, come out"the feamle voice says
Well, ok. So it's two humans, a boy and a girl, the boy has really dark hair and the girl seems really friendly.
"Hi! My name's Jokull and this is Acacia!Nice to meet you Shinx!"Jokull says
Well it's nice to meet you too Jokull and Acacia and it's Shaun, not Shinx :rolleyes:.
"We showed up just in time, you were almost finished off, I wonder why they were attacking you...." Jokull says
Oh! It was you? Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!!!!!! :D
"Hey, you want some food Shinx?" asks Acacia as Shaun's stomach rumbles loudly
Yes please! AND IT'S SHAUN NOT SHINX!!!!!!!:mad:
Mmmmmmmmmmmm that was some good food
"Glad to see you like it! You want to come with us on our journey? :confused:" Jokull asks
*Shaun shakes his head violently* No way!No no way! Nuhuh not a chance! I got my own journey thank you very much!
"Ok ok we get it just stop risking brain damage." Acacia says
"Ok so we'll be on our way then, see you soon and stay out of trouble."Jokull adds
Ok bye!!The last thing I hear is "Monti let's go!" "Salamence!".
Hmmmmmm maybe humans aren't so bad after all............

Ok guys make sure you reply and tell me what you think and thanks to
ice tomb9 for letting me use Jokull and Acacia :)!! Also, for clarification, Shaun can only talk to pokemon, not humans, everything he said to Jokull and Acacia was in his head, he never said those things. Ok remeber to reply and laterz!
Psy:cool:

[Psychic4Life]

Man, I wish this thing could get more popular. Hey, if you like this fanfic, please tell everyone you know about it!! Shaun is now at level 8 and it starts off in the Jubilife Pokemon Center which is where Jokull and Acacia took him in the last episode. Ok here's part 4.

Shaun's Super Story Part 4:Charging Up

Man, those humans were really nice. I would love to go with them but I have my own adventure! *Shaun walks out of the Pokemon Center* Whoa! Look at those big metal things (skyscrapers)! I think I have time to explore, so let's go!

Hmmmmhmhmhmhmhmmmmmm, look there! A building with GTS on it! Hahahahahaha, it's a clown giving out coupons!!!!Silly clown :lol:!!! Hey look! Traaaiiiiinnnnneeerrrrr'sss Schhhooollll (sounding it out). And over there! Juuuuubbbbiiiiilliiiifffeeee TeeeeeeVeeee(sounds out again). Cool!

Now how do I get back? I'm lost. Nooooooooo, this can't be happening.*sun has set now, Shaun is in an alley* It's daarrrkkk, scary too, this is really bad now :(. Huh! Where'd that thing come from? What's that thing in front of me? It looks like a skunk, hehe, a skunk.
"Hey! You! Get out of my alley! Who do you think you are!?" The Skunk thing (Skuntank) said
"Ughhhh, Shaun?"
"Not good enough! Dieeee!"

*Skuntank starts with a smokescreen, making it even harder to see.*Ahhh! Where'd he go? Ahhhh! Fury Swipes! Ow!Ow!Ow :(! Scratch! Oooooo that hurt!(Skuntank continues to use fury swipes and scratch while the smokescreen fades away) Ugh oh, here comes another fury swipes. Brace myself! Shhhhiiiiinnnnxxxx *Shaun uses charge and absorbs Skuntank's fury swipes* !!!!Hey, was that charge? I feel like my energy is back!
"Huh? What happened? What happened to my fury swipes? Let's try again!" Skuntank decides
*Skuntank uses another fury swipes, Shaun uses charge and absorbs Skuntank's fury swipes again*
Now I feel strong!!! Full out tackle! *Shaun's power from charge and a full blast tackle attack knock out the level 18 Skuntank*
"Ughhhhhh, no more! I'll let you go just stop!" Skuntank groans
"Just tell me how to get out of here." I say
"Take the next right and you'll be behind the trainer's school, just leave me alone!" Skuntank pleads
"Ok thanks"
Yay! I learned chrage! And hey, there's the sign to head east! Ok, maybe I can find directions to Sunyshore from Oreburgh City!

[Golem Crusher]

Shaun is lucky that there wasn't a stunktank gang.

(you can tell people about this in your signature. A little advice.)

[Psychic4Life]

I wasn't sure if I would break a rule if I did so thanks!

[Psychic4Life]

Hello readers, just wanted to say that I will probably be writing one Shaun Story a week, 99% of the time on the weekends. So don't expect to see one during the week. I'm very busy doing homework and running track.

[PokemonLover]

I <3 your story!

[Psychic4Life]

Alrighties then, I got some timeso let's go. Make sure you reply back and tell me what you think :). Shaun's at level 11

Shaun's Super Story Part 5: Oreburgh City
*Shaun follows the sign from the last episode while battling wild Bidoof, Starly, Kricketot, and one Abra. He levels up to 13 and learns Bite*
Sweet! Bite! Gnarlgnarlgnarlgnarl(biting a tree). Ok! Through that tunnel and then Oreburgh, if that Starly was right.

Ahhhh, so this is Oreburgh City! So many rocks though, not my type. So let's make this quick.*Shaun explores, sees the research center for fossils, discovers the gym, and then gets to the mine and enters......*

No luck yet, Geodude are so stupid!!! It's just dig dig dig, hide hide hide, attack attack attack. It would be really dark without these lanterns. Hehe, another Geodude, just sitting there. Hey stupid! Yeah you stupid cause you can't hear me cause I'm not talking!!! Hey! A giant rock snake thingy!! (Onix) Is that Mega Drain? No, it can't be.....*Onix backs as a Roselia presses it. A final Mega Drain knocks out Onix* "Rose! Hey! Rose!"
"Huh? Oh Shaun! Hi! How's it going?" Rose exclaims
"Fancy seeing you here. So are you training down here?"
"Yep! And I just leveled to 15!"
"Oh, I'm only 13, but let's see how we've grown since."
"Alright, let's go!"
Rose starts off with a Poison Sting, I use Charge, absorb the energy and use it agianst her with Bite. She uses Mega Drain and steals my health! How dare she! Hm, it doesn't really seem to hurt me that much (type resistance), but she still takes back some health. I use Leer to pump up for tackle while she uses Growth for a stronger Poison Sting. She launches Poison Sting as I use tackle. I get through the thorns and hit her. She quickly recovers and uses a pumped up Mega Drain. We each have about half health now, this is getting no where. She launches this yellow powder (Stun Spore). Ah! I can't move! This is bad! Ah apples, here comes Poison Sting! Ow! Ok Shaun, regroup, the Poison Sting let me move again. But, I'm low on health. I know! I'll use Charge when she launches another Mega Drain. I'll use Bite at full power and with help from my Leer and her Growth'ed Mega Drain, it should be enough for the win! Ok, just as planned, she uses Mega Drain. Charge! Bite!!!!! Yeah! Just as planned!
"Roselia......" Rose says weakly then faints.
Woohoo! I won! I feel stronger, really stronger!

Hey, Rose, wake up.
"Huh? Shaun? Did I win?"
"No, my Charged Bite finished you off."
"Ohh, that was still the best battle I've had ever!"
"Yeah, we should team up for a while." I say
"Yeah we should." Rose replies
"Ok, let's head to Nurse Joy then find directions to Sunyshore."
"I already did. Oreburgh is a dead end. We'll have to retrace our steps" Rose says
"Ok then let's head to the Pokemon Center! I could use a nap *yawn*."
*Shaun and Rose head to the Pokemon Center with empty bellies and drowsy eyes*

Thanks guys, tell me what you think! :D

[Psychic4Life]

Shaun is lucky that there wasn't a stunktank gang. Yeah, you're right, that would've been bad.

[Trombones13]

Nice story; keep it up. :-D

[Psychic4Life]

Thanks Kurt

[Dragax67]

I just tuned in to Shauns Super Story. I have read them all. THEY ROCK!

[Psychic4Life]

I just tuned in to Shauns Super Story. I have read them all. THEY ROCK!
Thanks for your support, tell all your friends! lol

[Psychic4Life]

Hey guys, Psy here. I don't knnow wether to keep writing SSS because I don't enjoy writing in the first person. So I decided to make a poll to see if you like SSS and want me to keep writing. Or, you don't like it and you want me to stop. I will be writing a new fanfic if I decide to close this one.

[Psychic4Life]

Ok, I decided that I will not write SSS(Shaun's Super Story) anymore, but if you really want to continue the SSS legacy, I'll let you start your own SSS thread and give you all of the details you will need to know. So if you want to take over, PM me.